I Planted a Flower

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  1. Sara Newman Avatar

    This seems so sad and personal.. I see my own father here. Now I know what my professor meant when she said “find the rhythm, most of his poems can be sung”. You’re the tragic king of introspective melancholy verse. Sending my Likes and Hearts 😉.

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    1. Josiah Vermont Avatar

      You’re very insightful. Thankyou. I hope you find something you enjoy.

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  2. William Mayes Avatar

    I discovered you after reading Separate Ways on Tiktok. Great work.

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    1. Josiah Vermont Avatar

      I am not on TikTok, or Instagram, but thankyou for your kind words.

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  3. 𝐘𝐚𝐞𝐥 Avatar

    I wonder who this one may be about. Perhaps a daughter. I can very clearly see the parallels between the writer and my own father, and in that way am able to relate. I’m sure you’ll see her again when she’s ready. God bless you

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    1. Josiah Vermont Avatar

      I’m glad it somehow speaks to you

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  4. Ximena Avatar

    Bittersweet. No one writes like this without going through trauma. May your words give you healing.

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  5. Collin Avatar

    Touching poem. I know the feeling all too well. Your words reach me.

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  6. John Anderson Avatar

    read this on father’s day. Moving.

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  7. Stacey L Avatar

    This is you in your element. Subtle rhythm with that impeccable rhyme. Your work reads so well.

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  8. Janet K Avatar

    My favourite real life poet!

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  9. Jasleen Singh Avatar

    I also discover you after reading Separate Ways on Tiktok. You are very good poet and write good words of powerful thought. If you are interested in reading some of my poetries please respond with message

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  10. David L Avatar

    I lost someone 3 years ago. This poem touched me. Hopefully you can still visit your flower. I can only leave mine behind.

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  11. Jagjit Avatar

    Lovely poem.

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  12. Conrad L Avatar

    This is like a sequel to ‘Too Late’. You’ve inspired me to write.

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